The new chapter was great, Azarias point view was awesome and makes me bad for her. My poor oracle is just trying to learn how to accept the love and comfort without the fear and doubt there use to, so I'm all for fighting for azaria.
Yes in a good way! I was surprised by how much internal concern Osaron was expressing towards the mc's situation(in the final page(s) I believe). Anyways thank you for making this wonderful IF it is very underrated and unpredictable which are things that I deeply value in IF's.
"Mmm doomed yaoi save me doomed yaoi" I say as the O x M! MC route dissolves deeper and deeper into a weird angsty situationship because both my boys are terrible at feelings. As always this IF controls my life, excited for more!!
this was so amazing!!!! i absolutely adore the characters and the pacing is so so GOOD!! the progression/development between the mc and whoever we choose to either be friendly or be interested in is perfectly slow (and warranted, considering the mc's circumstances and history) and satisfying. the writing is enchanting as well!! thank you for sharing such a lovely story, i look forward to more!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this! Your writing, pacing and dialogue are excellent, as is the cast of characters. I love the amount of choice we have and I am so invested in the story already. I canβt wait to see where you take this! Well done!
Thank you so much for your kind words!! ππ₯Ή I appreciate it a lot. Iβm happy youβve enjoyed my story, and I canβt wait to show you more too!
The 4th chapter was great, and i loved the new interactions with Azaria, im still stuck with not knowing what demon form to go with in the future chapters, I love the bird and butterfly's. But the idea of being a long extinct bull dog fire lion Is also amazing. I can't wait to see how the future chapters go since I'm not sure how a fight would go with the butterfly or the birds, but I'm certain that they could lead to absolutely adorable interactions with the love interests. I wish you the best going forward and hope you enjoy and have fun writing the story as much as I have when I read this story.
Iβm happy you enjoyed the new chapter and the scene with Az. The routes will be locked in the next chapter, so youβll be able to spend even more time with them. And if you canβt choose a form, then I did my job right! hehe
I definitely enjoy writing this story and love hearing what readers think about it, so thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts! π
I'm fully obsessed with this IF. You are doing such a wonderful job ri! Like it's honestly so great! But alsoooooo stop making stupid Laz so appealing! I don't trust em for shit but I'm still romancing them ππππ
I love this story so far. MC seems in my opinion somewhat autistic. I am autistic myself and the way they think and react to things is kinda like I do. So if this was intended or not I like the representation. :)
I'm happy you're enjoying it! π I think my ADHD influences how I write my main characters, when I intend it and don't intend it, and of course it's not the same as ASD, but perhaps that's where the similarities come from. I'm glad you like it!
I like this a lot, the writing is really good, and the interactions are great. my favorite character so far is Azaria, I can't wait for future chapters and wish you the best going forward.
the writing is so good !! I want to know about them a little! You're writing of characterization is so good! I can't wait for the chapter 3! The ball party is really interesting chapter party!
MC and O dynamic is kinda everything I want and more. Just cold heartless person x the one(1) person they have a soft spot for. Greatest ship in my personal opinion.
Just finish it and already looking forward to more. :) Also, just a question what are the ages or how does that work? I'm only asking bc Sovereign has a kid and we can romance both of them so I'm only curious.
Demons are immortal, so they can live very long if they're lucky. I haven't set specific ages for them, but Vez was already older than 50 years when they got a child, so Vez is around 100 years old now, Laz is similar in age with them, O is around 50, and Ash & Az are a bit younger. The MC is at least 30 years old.
They're adults but not very old by demonic standards.
Also, (it's not a dig at you or anyone else) I'd like to ask everyone to use neutral pronouns/words for the characters as their gender isn't set in stone. Thank you :)
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Ashmedai is absolutely wonderful ;-; to the point that I'm hoping my future lover will be as gentle as him:3
Aw, I'm glad you like them so much!! π₯Ήπ
:3333 all the character are well-written, this made me replay the game many times:3. Anyway it's such a great work ehe
Thank you for your kind words π₯°
The new chapter was great, Azarias point view was awesome and makes me bad for her. My poor oracle is just trying to learn how to accept the love and comfort without the fear and doubt there use to, so I'm all for fighting for azaria.
I'm glad you enjoyed the new chapter and Az's route! π Az would fight for you too
I just finished this and omg its so GOOD?! Ashmedai my beloved..
Thank you!! π I'm happy to see another Ashmedai's lover
Alright im addicted now i keep replaying
Hehe I'm glad to hear that! Hope you enjoy it π
just finished read every route the update is absolutely amazing I loved the little POVs of the ROs I cant wait for the next update ^^
Glad you're enjoyed the update and even played through all the routes! Thank you π
Damn...i'm speechless
In a good way, I hope? π
Yes in a good way! I was surprised by how much internal concern Osaron was expressing towards the mc's situation(in the final page(s) I believe). Anyways thank you for making this wonderful IF it is very underrated and unpredictable which are things that I deeply value in IF's.
I'm glad to hear that! Thank you for sharing you thoughts π
Absolutely loved the update! It was so great, and I love this story. I look forward to seeing where jt goes!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the new chapter π
The update is just beautiful omg ππ₯°π«
Thank you!! π
"Mmm doomed yaoi save me doomed yaoi" I say as the O x M! MC route dissolves deeper and deeper into a weird angsty situationship because both my boys are terrible at feelings. As always this IF controls my life, excited for more!!
I'm glad I'm not the only one π«ππ€
For me it's MC X Laz. Don't trust them for shit but i can't get myself to stay away.
Hehe glad you're enjoying their dynamic! π
β¦I may have just had a sleepless night reading through every possible choice and reading as many asks on tumblr as I could afterwards
Iβm so enthralled by this IF!! I hope youβre well and I hope you know youβve been doing an amazing job with this β₯
I'm so happy you enjoyed the story so much!! Thank you for your kind words π₯Ίπ I hope you stay well too!
this was so amazing!!!! i absolutely adore the characters and the pacing is so so GOOD!! the progression/development between the mc and whoever we choose to either be friendly or be interested in is perfectly slow (and warranted, considering the mc's circumstances and history) and satisfying. the writing is enchanting as well!! thank you for sharing such a lovely story, i look forward to more!!!
Thank you so much for your kind words! π I'm happy you're enjoying the story. I promise the romance will start picking up soon hehe :)
I thoroughly enjoyed this! Your writing, pacing and dialogue are excellent, as is the cast of characters. I love the amount of choice we have and I am so invested in the story already. I canβt wait to see where you take this! Well done!
Thank you so much for your kind words!! ππ₯Ή I appreciate it a lot. Iβm happy youβve enjoyed my story, and I canβt wait to show you more too!
Finally got to finish the update and I loved it! This story is wonderful, and I am excited to see where it goes!
Thank you! π
The 4th chapter was great, and i loved the new interactions with Azaria, im still stuck with not knowing what demon form to go with in the future chapters, I love the bird and butterfly's. But the idea of being a long extinct bull dog fire lion Is also amazing. I can't wait to see how the future chapters go since I'm not sure how a fight would go with the butterfly or the birds, but I'm certain that they could lead to absolutely adorable interactions with the love interests. I wish you the best going forward and hope you enjoy and have fun writing the story as much as I have when I read this story.
Iβm happy you enjoyed the new chapter and the scene with Az. The routes will be locked in the next chapter, so youβll be able to spend even more time with them. And if you canβt choose a form, then I did my job right! hehe
I definitely enjoy writing this story and love hearing what readers think about it, so thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts! π
everytime I see an update I feel blessed
I'm happy to hear that! π
Really enjoyed this. You are a talented writer.
Thank you! π
MC x O MY BELOVED!! Stooop the moments this update were so good I love these idiots so much πππ
Hehe I'm glad you enjoyed them! π
Loved the new chapter! Can't wait for more!
Thank you! π
OMFG I LOVE THIS SM I KEEP CHECKING FOR UPDATES IM SO HAPPY THAT CHAPTER 3 IS OUT YAYAYAY
I'm glad you love it! Enjoy the chapter π
I'm fully obsessed with this IF. You are doing such a wonderful job ri! Like it's honestly so great! But alsoooooo stop making stupid Laz so appealing! I don't trust em for shit but I'm still romancing them ππππ
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! π It's still such a pleasant surprise for me that someone likes my story so much.
As for Laz—HEHE... I'm happy people don't trust them but still like them; it means I'm doing my job right π€
I love this story so far. MC seems in my opinion somewhat autistic. I am autistic myself and the way they think and react to things is kinda like I do. So if this was intended or not I like the representation. :)
I'm happy you're enjoying it! π
I think my ADHD influences how I write my main characters, when I intend it and don't intend it, and of course it's not the same as ASD, but perhaps that's where the similarities come from. I'm glad you like it!
I like this a lot, the writing is really good, and the interactions are great. my favorite character so far is Azaria, I can't wait for future chapters and wish you the best going forward.
Thank you for your kind words! π The work on the next chapter is progressing actively, and it'll be up in a month or two
Az would be proud to be your favoriteπ€
ngl im kind of obsessed with ashmedai
So happy to hear that!! π€
the writing is so good !! I want to know about them a little! You're writing of characterization is so good! I can't wait for the chapter 3! The ball party is really interesting chapter party!
Thank you! The next chapter is being worked on, and I can't wait to share it, too π
L clenching and unclenching their fist is sooooooo pride and prejudice hehehahahhahoo >:))
You're so right! The famous gesture π€
MC and O dynamic is kinda everything I want and more. Just cold heartless person x the one(1) person they have a soft spot for. Greatest ship in my personal opinion.
Yeeeesss, I agree π€ I'm glad you like them!
By God i loved this update!!
I'm glad to hear that! And thank you for leaving a comment π
even if I now think Laz is a shady bugger... π I still enjoyed it alooot! Well done!
Very interesting beginning, looking forward for more!
Thank you π
This is a fantastic start, and I can't wait for more.
Thank you! π
Interesting. I'd definitely like to explore this world and the characters more. Here's hoping for more in the future. =)
Thank you! I'm working on the second chapter, so there's definitely will be more in the near future.
ya had at me at full demonic form
Just finish it and already looking forward to more. :) Also, just a question what are the ages or how does that work? I'm only asking bc Sovereign has a kid and we can romance both of them so I'm only curious.
Thank you! π
Demons are immortal, so they can live very long if they're lucky. I haven't set specific ages for them, but Vez was already older than 50 years when they got a child, so Vez is around 100 years old now, Laz is similar in age with them, O is around 50, and Ash & Az are a bit younger. The MC is at least 30 years old.
They're adults but not very old by demonic standards.
I hope it answers your question!
Welcome and this does help so thank you! π
I love it! π₯°. Hope you keep it up author.
Thank you! π
Im already kinda inlove with the two brothers.. wonder how that's gonna work out... ππ
Hehe I'm glad you like them!
Also, (it's not a dig at you or anyone else) I'd like to ask everyone to use neutral pronouns/words for the characters as their gender isn't set in stone. Thank you :)