Probably not the best character to be relating to immensely (though I do with worse :/), but not your fault no need to apologize. It's a bit funny, though, that it didn't used to click, but had shit happen six months ago that really fit what happened with their "friends", and, yeah. Have even more reasons to love the story now, unfortunately π
I'm happy you're enjoying the story! π«Ά If you have trouble with saves, it's best to save them to your PC/phone if possible because the browser's saves depend on your browser not clearing cookies.
Love your work. There were quite a few typos and grammatical errors but I enjoyed the heart and soul you put into this. I'm also not a grammar or spelling tyrant so I can forgive a lot of mistakes XD
Just adding here that there might be spoilers for those who haven't played the game so read my comments at your own risk.
Out of all the ROs in this game, Laz intrigues me the most. They're not what I pictured for a General. I find them a very refreshing take on someone who plays the role of a General. And each layer you successfully peel off them just makes me hungry for more. Like Oracle, I really want to get under their skin and find out what makes them tick. Of course, it's even better if they get flustered and uncomfortable because of Oracle >:) I really wish someone in the group can drive Laz mad the way Az drives Os mad so easily. What can I say? I just want to see Laz break XD XD
Vez is so sweet. They're my second favorite RO just cause they're supposed to be the most powerful person in the demon world but they're just so soft and so tender to MC. I love them <3 Will we ever get a scene where we find out Os feelings about their parent's relationship with Oracle? Maybe Os confronts Oracle about it too. Juicy juicy interactions XD
Also I literally felt Selene's slap across the screen. You wrote it so well that it had quite the impact. I was sympathizing with Selene but that punch was so unexpected (even if it made sense) that it made me so outraged at her in that moment.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope it comes soon.
I do by best to edit, but I can't catch everything, so sorry about that. I reread the text so many times that I almost memorize it and don't see very obvious typos/etc π« If you see errors, please copy them into the form.
I'm glad you're enjoying their routes! Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts π«Ά There will be some conversations about the relationships between all the LIs and the Oracle eventually. Os won't confront the Oracle, though. It's not in their character, esp when their parent is involved, haha. They'll have a different approach—I have already planned this scene for the next chapter, so you'll see it soon ;)
I'm pleased Selene made you feel different emotions π I hoped she would.
I've played each LI path through the game already, so I'm taking a bit of a break. But the next time I play the chapters (and I'm definitely playing them once you have new updates) I'll keep the typos in mind and add them to your form :)
You're cruel. First you hint at a bath scene with each LI and now dangling this juicy interaction of Os and their feelings about Oracle's relationship with their parent? I'm going to die from impatience here! D:
Quick question, when do you get to select your height? Currently in my profile it says that I set my character's height to "very tall" when I never saw the cycle option to choose a height. π I kept going back to double check but maybe this is just a glitched...?
THANK YOU For asking this! I somehow missed this and i totally wasnt gonna ask (because its me)
But as someone who has a MC who is. . .Genetically blessed in height (not forgetting my other genetically cursed one) i am glad i now know where the height changes is
Making this comment RIGHT after i read what happened.....
Giving a SPOILER from CH. 6 (kinda) warning for new readers
Well you can guess which route i played but OH MY GOODNESS THAT KISS- AND A HUG AND WHEN THEY WERE COOKING TOGETHER TOT also i may hate [a little] the demons who interrupted the kiss ππͺ I'M JOKING but really what would happen if they didn't? That's one of my questions
Just going to say it I love you dear author, this is an amazing if, i mean this If so much? The story is something wonderful and the character? The way they are written...... Only played one route for now but when i finish this one i AM going to played all of them π€ No one can stop me
Also i NEED to know more about Az. For a while i actually thought the Mc was about to meet the siblings mothers but well nevermind..... For now because i do want to know what their reactions will be since their child is dating? the oracle
I love to see an Az lover π I'm happy to hear you had fun with their route!
Thank you so much for your kind words π₯Ήπ«Ά I hope you'll enjoy the other routes too!
I do plan to let the Oracle meet their parents eventually. Maybe in the epilogue, maybe sooner, but I'm eager to write that scene, so it will happen 100%
The very concept of β¨ demon besties β¨ kinda cool I must admit. I love my demon besties and theirs relations with mc
But Ash the most, like what was these kissing scenes AND WHY THEY ARE SO GOOD AYO I MELTED IN MY CHAIR AND GNAWED ON THE WALL, erm yea, anyways
Past that, your depiction of mental issues and how they can be treated are refreshingly sensitive
Mc is cool, world is cool, characters are cool, sorry, my comprehensive english is restricted to a blatant thirsting, can't do a whole odes how something is great, but your story is great, the entirety of it, and every aspect there is and can be
Oh boi, did it was fun to read, yes it did, but even aside that, I love Ash they are cutie pie. Not just that, overall great
You really did, I just can't from this sentence properly. Something something... you did a good job with a depiction of this issues and how they can influence a person? Thinking about it -wise and such? Not just that, but people -- ahem, demons -- of note are extremely sensible about it, that's great. For example by taking things that mc says seriously, that is, and treating them as normal person
Of course i had to replay it again before playing the new chapter. I didn't notice this before but the thing that Az says "Whose ass should i kick?" when they see that the MC is hurt, LIKE THAT'S SO SWEEET since we know that they don't like to fight ππβ€οΈ
Uhm that cliffhanger?! Ri how could you do that to me?!. . . TO US?! I feel betrayed, hurt, and attacked Λβ§ΒΊΒ·(ΛΛΜ£Μ£Μ₯βΛΜ£Μ£Μ₯ )β§ΒΊΒ·Λ
Also ive only played Romanced!Os' route (On my way to romance my other pookies (Λ΅ Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°Λ΅)) but QFYFTAFTYATYAYFYF i want to Os to kiss me on my hot mouth N O W- that forehead kiss was NOT enough
I hope you have lots of fun with the other routes! π«Ά Kisses will happen v soon (I don't even consider it a spoiler because it's obvious the time has come, lol + I don't have the patience to wait longer).
Holy moly that cliffhanger.. I need more. I must say this IF is brilliant. Usually Ros in IFs don't do much besides romancing the MC, I find it refreshing that these Ros influence the story. I have tried them all and V is my favourite. L coming up close second. A coming third, only cause our adorable shy Ash has the first (.. wont say as I don't to spoiler) scene out all the Ros. And i get to try out all routes due to being GoC. Might have to become a patreon member.
This is Fabulous -- really enjoyed the read. Especially intrigued with the plot as I feel you (1) don't get to play a demon often (and you're not evil); (2) the 'Oracle' background is mysterious as it is interesting; (C) fighting a slow insanity? Say less~
You have to have a really compelling MC; the balance between who they already are with the story you've crafted/their past + who we make them into as we play. And you nailed it: I really love that my poor baby bop has some serious trauma with being abandoned and just - phony peeps using her. That going into the romance: my MC isn't easy and is suspicious of everyone's motivations (like, 'why would you love me, you dirty Liar'). You can see them catching feelings in routes, but it's very - - Careful. And I appreciate that. You can tell LIs realize it too, in their own way. That they're gonna have to work for it.
Speaking of (!): My favs are Vezriel (we love a Queen~) and Azaria -- which is funny b/c they feel like opposite ends of the spectrum, but they have similars as well. I love how protective Vez is and that - - (subdued/royal)humor. And her little bolds. When she suddenly wanted to spar, it was one of my fav bits - I was shocked - and it was hot? I don't know: Vez unexpected does things to me. lol And I love how Azaria comes across as this play-girl who really won't care about MC -- but the route was really deep (rings!!)! Her spontaneity and how she's somehow - honest, but still hides herself is delicious. (Also: music hotties will get me every time.) And I beamed with moment she caries MC and then -- suddenly breaks out running -- the GOOBER. Feel like my Damaged(TM) baby *needs* that.
Thank you so much for all your efforts and sharing this with us! Rooting for you and looking forward to all you have in store! β€οΈ *Edit* Also loved the bonus moments!! Yassss, alpha-bet!!! ππ
Thank you for reading, for your kind words, and for sharing your thoughts with me! I appreciate it a lot, and I'm happy you're enjoying the story π«Ά I hope you'll have even more fun with Vez's and Az's routes in the next chapter (when it's out). There are some interesting things happening, hehe π
You tease! haha Don't threaten me with a good time~ π Best of luck with next chappie; the world's crazy so please take your time and have fun with it!
Like so freaking cute and sweet (why does it seem as if i say this about everyone π my vocabulary is limited what can i say π€·ββοΈ) There's obviously a lot that they are hiding but still they try to help the PC/MC as long as they are comfortable and i just β¨β€οΈπβ¨β€οΈ
That's it. It's almost 1am but i need to replay all of the chapters, took me longer than i thought I'd but if did so i can sleep peacefully
I love them so much πβ€οΈ Respectfully CAN THEY MARRY ME? like rn.
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Still canβt wait to see more of Vez (drooling fondly) :3
I really love the narration about how they and Oracle are both burdened by fate but managed to carry on with resilience (awwwww)
I'm glad you're enjoying their route! π«Ά
I relate far far too much with the MC. Its honestly hurts a lot, seeing my thoughts and experiences and such so directly reflected
I'm so sorry to hear that π«
Probably not the best character to be relating to immensely (though I do with worse :/), but not your fault no need to apologize. It's a bit funny, though, that it didn't used to click, but had shit happen six months ago that really fit what happened with their "friends", and, yeah. Have even more reasons to love the story now, unfortunately π
Riiiiiiiii how I'm inlove with this. I dont even mind i lost all my saves I'm enjoying all the replays πβ₯οΈ
I'm happy you're enjoying the story! π«Ά If you have trouble with saves, it's best to save them to your PC/phone if possible because the browser's saves depend on your browser not clearing cookies.
Love your work. There were quite a few typos and grammatical errors but I enjoyed the heart and soul you put into this. I'm also not a grammar or spelling tyrant so I can forgive a lot of mistakes XD
Just adding here that there might be spoilers for those who haven't played the game so read my comments at your own risk.
Out of all the ROs in this game, Laz intrigues me the most. They're not what I pictured for a General. I find them a very refreshing take on someone who plays the role of a General. And each layer you successfully peel off them just makes me hungry for more. Like Oracle, I really want to get under their skin and find out what makes them tick. Of course, it's even better if they get flustered and uncomfortable because of Oracle >:) I really wish someone in the group can drive Laz mad the way Az drives Os mad so easily. What can I say? I just want to see Laz break XD XD
Vez is so sweet. They're my second favorite RO just cause they're supposed to be the most powerful person in the demon world but they're just so soft and so tender to MC. I love them <3 Will we ever get a scene where we find out Os feelings about their parent's relationship with Oracle? Maybe Os confronts Oracle about it too. Juicy juicy interactions XD
Also I literally felt Selene's slap across the screen. You wrote it so well that it had quite the impact. I was sympathizing with Selene but that punch was so unexpected (even if it made sense) that it made me so outraged at her in that moment.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope it comes soon.
I do by best to edit, but I can't catch everything, so sorry about that. I reread the text so many times that I almost memorize it and don't see very obvious typos/etc π« If you see errors, please copy them into the form.
I'm glad you're enjoying their routes! Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts π«Ά There will be some conversations about the relationships between all the LIs and the Oracle eventually. Os won't confront the Oracle, though. It's not in their character, esp when their parent is involved, haha. They'll have a different approach—I have already planned this scene for the next chapter, so you'll see it soon ;)
I'm pleased Selene made you feel different emotions π I hoped she would.
I've played each LI path through the game already, so I'm taking a bit of a break. But the next time I play the chapters (and I'm definitely playing them once you have new updates) I'll keep the typos in mind and add them to your form :)
You're cruel. First you hint at a bath scene with each LI and now dangling this juicy interaction of Os and their feelings about Oracle's relationship with their parent? I'm going to die from impatience here! D:
Thank you π«Ά I'll appreciate your help whenever you're comfortable to offer it.
I love teasing my readers hehe π I'll be making the next chapter shorter than this one, so hopefully I'll be able to show all the fun stuff soon!
Quick question, when do you get to select your height? Currently in my profile it says that I set my character's height to "very tall" when I never saw the cycle option to choose a height. π I kept going back to double check but maybe this is just a glitched...?
It's in the ball chapter (3? I don't remember ππ), right before the dance starts/doesn't start.
Wow, that was quick. Thanks! :D
THANK YOU For asking this! I somehow missed this and i totally wasnt gonna ask (because its me)
But as someone who has a MC who is. . .Genetically blessed in height (not forgetting my other genetically cursed one) i am glad i now know where the height changes is
Happy to help! ^^
WHAT WAS THAT CLIFFHANGER RI?!!! HUH?!
π *crazy smile*
Making this comment RIGHT after i read what happened.....
Giving a SPOILER from CH. 6 (kinda) warning for new readers
Well you can guess which route i played but OH MY GOODNESS THAT KISS- AND A HUG AND WHEN THEY WERE COOKING TOGETHER TOT also i may hate [a little] the demons who interrupted the kiss ππͺ I'M JOKING but really what would happen if they didn't? That's one of my questions
Just going to say it I love
you dear author, this is an amazing if,i meanthis If so much? The story is something wonderful and the character? The way they are written...... Only played one route for now but when i finish this one i AM going to played all of them π€ No one can stop meAlso i NEED to know more about Az. For a while i actually thought the Mc was about to meet the siblings mothers but well nevermind..... For now because i do want to know what their reactions will be since their child is dating? the oracle
I love to see an Az lover π I'm happy to hear you had fun with their route!
Thank you so much for your kind words π₯Ήπ«Ά I hope you'll enjoy the other routes too!
I do plan to let the Oracle meet their parents eventually. Maybe in the epilogue, maybe sooner, but I'm eager to write that scene, so it will happen 100%
Tbh at first i wanted to go with O's route but Az just stole my heart β‘ LIKE THEY ARE THE SWEETEST πππ
The reveal at the end was worth the wait
I'm happy you think so βΊοΈπ«Ά
The very concept of β¨ demon besties β¨ kinda cool I must admit. I love my demon besties and theirs relations with mc
But Ash the most, like what was these kissing scenes AND WHY THEY ARE SO GOOD AYO I MELTED IN MY CHAIR AND GNAWED ON THE WALL, erm yea, anyways
Past that, your depiction of mental issues and how they can be treated are refreshingly sensitive
Mc is cool, world is cool, characters are cool, sorry, my comprehensive english is restricted to a blatant thirsting, can't do a whole odes how something is great, but your story is great, the entirety of it, and every aspect there is and can be
I still haven't done Ash's route but WHAT DO YOU MEAN KISSING SCENES?
There might be two characters who get their first kisses this chapter... :)
I mean... Gnawing at walls. (Haha, there is, and two of them!)
I'm glad you liked these moments! They were fuuuuun to write
Thank you π I rarely see anyone mention the mental health part of TAS, and I hope I'm doing it justice.
I appreciate your kind words a lot π₯Ήπ«Ά
Oh boi, did it was fun to read, yes it did, but even aside that, I love Ash they are cutie pie. Not just that, overall great
You really did, I just can't from this sentence properly. Something something... you did a good job with a depiction of this issues and how they can influence a person? Thinking about it -wise and such? Not just that, but people -- ahem, demons -- of note are extremely sensible about it, that's great. For example by taking things that mc says seriously, that is, and treating them as normal person
Of course i had to replay it again before playing the new chapter. I didn't notice this before but the thing that Az says "Whose ass should i kick?" when they see that the MC is hurt, LIKE THAT'S SO SWEEET since we know that they don't like to fight ππβ€οΈ
Yesss, they're ready to throw hands for the Oracle even if they don't like doing it in general π
GODDAMN THIS WAS A GREAT UPDATE
Thank you! π«Ά
WAIT NO I FORGOT IT WAS COMING OUT TODAY
Uhm that cliffhanger?! Ri how could you do that to me?!. . . TO US?! I feel betrayed, hurt, and attacked Λβ§ΒΊΒ·(ΛΛΜ£Μ£Μ₯βΛΜ£Μ£Μ₯ )β§ΒΊΒ·Λ
Also ive only played Romanced!Os' route (On my way to romance my other pookies (Λ΅ Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°Λ΅)) but QFYFTAFTYATYAYFYF i want to Os to kiss me on my hot mouth N O W- that forehead kiss was NOT enough
Great cliffhanger, right? π
I hope you have lots of fun with the other routes! π«Ά Kisses will happen v soon (I don't even consider it a spoiler because it's obvious the time has come, lol + I don't have the patience to wait longer).
Yes very great cliffhanger, would recommend more Β΄β‘`
Holy moly that cliffhanger.. I need more. I must say this IF is brilliant. Usually Ros in IFs don't do much besides romancing the MC, I find it refreshing that these Ros influence the story. I have tried them all and V is my favourite. L coming up close second. A coming third, only cause our adorable shy Ash has the first (.. wont say as I don't to spoiler) scene out all the Ros. And i get to try out all routes due to being GoC. Might have to become a patreon member.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm happy you're enjoying the story and having fun with the routes βΊοΈπ«Ά
ahhh im so excited for the update today!!1!
It's out! π₯³
OMG IM SO EARYL
2 more days
Tomorrow! π₯³
This is Fabulous -- really enjoyed the read. Especially intrigued with the plot as I feel you (1) don't get to play a demon often (and you're not evil); (2) the 'Oracle' background is mysterious as it is interesting; (C) fighting a slow insanity? Say less~
You have to have a really compelling MC; the balance between who they already are with the story you've crafted/their past + who we make them into as we play. And you nailed it: I really love that my poor baby bop has some serious trauma with being abandoned and just - phony peeps using her. That going into the romance: my MC isn't easy and is suspicious of everyone's motivations (like, 'why would you love me, you dirty Liar'). You can see them catching feelings in routes, but it's very - - Careful. And I appreciate that. You can tell LIs realize it too, in their own way. That they're gonna have to work for it.
Speaking of (!): My favs are Vezriel (we love a Queen~) and Azaria -- which is funny b/c they feel like opposite ends of the spectrum, but they have similars as well. I love how protective Vez is and that - - (subdued/royal)humor. And her little bolds. When she suddenly wanted to spar, it was one of my fav bits - I was shocked - and it was hot? I don't know: Vez unexpected does things to me. lol And I love how Azaria comes across as this play-girl who really won't care about MC -- but the route was really deep (rings!!)! Her spontaneity and how she's somehow - honest, but still hides herself is delicious. (Also: music hotties will get me every time.) And I beamed with moment she caries MC and then -- suddenly breaks out running -- the GOOBER. Feel like my Damaged(TM) baby *needs* that.
Thank you so much for all your efforts and sharing this with us! Rooting for you and looking forward to all you have in store! β€οΈ *Edit* Also loved the bonus moments!! Yassss, alpha-bet!!! ππ
Thank you for reading, for your kind words, and for sharing your thoughts with me! I appreciate it a lot, and I'm happy you're enjoying the story π«Ά I hope you'll have even more fun with Vez's and Az's routes in the next chapter (when it's out). There are some interesting things happening, hehe π
You tease! haha Don't threaten me with a good time~ π
Best of luck with next chappie; the world's crazy so please take your time and have fun with it!
Thank you π I'm very close to finishing it, so hopefully I'll be able to show it to you soon
Replaying Az route and i just had to comment
They are such IDHDKSOMAOP
Like so freaking cute and sweet (why does it seem as if i say this about everyone π my vocabulary is limited what can i say π€·ββοΈ) There's obviously a lot that they are hiding but still they try to help the PC/MC as long as they are comfortable and i just β¨β€οΈπβ¨β€οΈ
That's it. It's almost 1am but i need to replay all of the chapters, took me longer than i thought I'd but if did so i can sleep peacefully
I love them so much πβ€οΈ Respectfully CAN THEY MARRY ME? like rn.
I'm so happy you're enjoying their route!! They're a sweetie and deserve more love π
I'll give them all the love i can π