I'm fully obsessed with this IF. You are doing such a wonderful job ri! Like it's honestly so great! But alsoooooo stop making stupid Laz so appealing! I don't trust em for shit but I'm still romancing them ππππ
I love this story so far. MC seems in my opinion somewhat autistic. I am autistic myself and the way they think and react to things is kinda like I do. So if this was intended or not I like the representation. :)
I'm happy you're enjoying it! π I think my ADHD influences how I write my main characters, when I intend it and don't intend it, and of course it's not the same as ASD, but perhaps that's where the similarities come from. I'm glad you like it!
I like this a lot, the writing is really good, and the interactions are great. my favorite character so far is Azaria, I can't wait for future chapters and wish you the best going forward.
the writing is so good !! I want to know about them a little! You're writing of characterization is so good! I can't wait for the chapter 3! The ball party is really interesting chapter party!
MC and O dynamic is kinda everything I want and more. Just cold heartless person x the one(1) person they have a soft spot for. Greatest ship in my personal opinion.
Just finish it and already looking forward to more. :) Also, just a question what are the ages or how does that work? I'm only asking bc Sovereign has a kid and we can romance both of them so I'm only curious.
Demons are immortal, so they can live very long if they're lucky. I haven't set specific ages for them, but Vez was already older than 50 years when they got a child, so Vez is around 100 years old now, Laz is similar in age with them, O is around 50, and Ash & Az are a bit younger. The MC is at least 30 years old.
They're adults but not very old by demonic standards.
Also, (it's not a dig at you or anyone else) I'd like to ask everyone to use neutral pronouns/words for the characters as their gender isn't set in stone. Thank you :)
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I'm fully obsessed with this IF. You are doing such a wonderful job ri! Like it's honestly so great! But alsoooooo stop making stupid Laz so appealing! I don't trust em for shit but I'm still romancing them ππππ
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! π It's still such a pleasant surprise for me that someone likes my story so much.
As for Laz—HEHE... I'm happy people don't trust them but still like them; it means I'm doing my job right π€
I love this story so far. MC seems in my opinion somewhat autistic. I am autistic myself and the way they think and react to things is kinda like I do. So if this was intended or not I like the representation. :)
I'm happy you're enjoying it! π
I think my ADHD influences how I write my main characters, when I intend it and don't intend it, and of course it's not the same as ASD, but perhaps that's where the similarities come from. I'm glad you like it!
I like this a lot, the writing is really good, and the interactions are great. my favorite character so far is Azaria, I can't wait for future chapters and wish you the best going forward.
Thank you for your kind words! π The work on the next chapter is progressing actively, and it'll be up in a month or two
Az would be proud to be your favoriteπ€
ngl im kind of obsessed with ashmedai
So happy to hear that!! π€
the writing is so good !! I want to know about them a little! You're writing of characterization is so good! I can't wait for the chapter 3! The ball party is really interesting chapter party!
Thank you! The next chapter is being worked on, and I can't wait to share it, too π
L clenching and unclenching their fist is sooooooo pride and prejudice hehehahahhahoo >:))
You're so right! The famous gesture π€
MC and O dynamic is kinda everything I want and more. Just cold heartless person x the one(1) person they have a soft spot for. Greatest ship in my personal opinion.
Yeeeesss, I agree π€ I'm glad you like them!
By God i loved this update!!
I'm glad to hear that! And thank you for leaving a comment π
even if I now think Laz is a shady bugger... π I still enjoyed it alooot! Well done!
Very interesting beginning, looking forward for more!
Thank you π
This is a fantastic start, and I can't wait for more.
Thank you! π
Interesting. I'd definitely like to explore this world and the characters more. Here's hoping for more in the future. =)
Thank you! I'm working on the second chapter, so there's definitely will be more in the near future.
ya had me at full demonic form

Just finish it and already looking forward to more. :) Also, just a question what are the ages or how does that work? I'm only asking bc Sovereign has a kid and we can romance both of them so I'm only curious.
Thank you! π
Demons are immortal, so they can live very long if they're lucky. I haven't set specific ages for them, but Vez was already older than 50 years when they got a child, so Vez is around 100 years old now, Laz is similar in age with them, O is around 50, and Ash & Az are a bit younger. The MC is at least 30 years old.
They're adults but not very old by demonic standards.
I hope it answers your question!
Welcome and this does help so thank you! π
I love it! π₯°. Hope you keep it up author.
Thank you! π
Im already kinda inlove with the two brothers.. wonder how that's gonna work out... ππ
Hehe I'm glad you like them!
Also, (it's not a dig at you or anyone else) I'd like to ask everyone to use neutral pronouns/words for the characters as their gender isn't set in stone. Thank you :)