Chapter 2 Released!
It's here! Around 60K for the whole update, with an average of ~12K words for one playthrough.
I recommend replaying from the start because I edited a couple of variables in the first chapter and something could break if you use a save.
In this chapter
- You call tell (or not) the demon of your choice about your curious vision from the first chapter.
- Learn what the characters do for fun and have a small discussion about it.
- Find new useful information about making most of your abilities and start training with some side help.
- Visit the Abyss! Such a great experience.
- First romantic choice. It's a light one, but it's a start 💛
- Get princess carried if you want.
- This chapter introduces the first “pushing away” choices. They will be counted and will affect how the characters react to some things you do or will add some flavor text now and then. These choices won’t lock you from the friendly/romantic routes. However, they do have some other side effects… At least in this chapter.
Small changes
- Added ages to the characters’ profiles, including the MC.
- Added the option to customize the characters’ gender.
- Balanced the characters’ gender in the “both genders” option.
- Updated the Codex with a bit more lore information.
For the “pushing away” choice in this particular chapter, you will have a choice to apologize or change your mind about it in the next couple of chapters (tentatively) and speak about it with the affected character. I’m still on the fence if it’ll decrease the overall “pushing” counter or not; I’ll probably decide that when I write these scenes.
This is an experimental feature (that I could delete or change at some point), but I hope I make it work in the story because I think it's a nice idea that negative choices won’t just decrease “relationship points” but also will be remembered by the characters and affect how they view some things you do or say or how they act around you the more you push them away. Especially if you want to smooch them at some point when you were cold to them just recently or for a while, lol.
It’s not perfect, but I’m satisfied with the chapter for now. It feels like I’ve been working on it a bit too long, and after rereading 10+ times to edit it, I’ve grown blind to weak places in it (and also kind of tired of it). I need to let it rest for a bit before returning to hone it, but I’ll probably do it only in the future when I have more chapters written or even after I finish the story since I want to keep moving forward and not stall in one place.
I'll continue planning details for the next chapter and then start drafting it. I've already thought of interesting things to include that could be very fun to write (and to read, hopefully, considering the main topic for the chapter is full of potential 🤭). I'm very excited to work on it, especially since I'm almost done with building the foundations in the story and soon will be able to get to the juicy parts of the plot. And there are also personal side stories of the cast, which will be starting in the next ~two chapters. Can’t wait to get to those too.
I hope you enjoy this update! If you do, I would love to hear your thoughts on it 💛
The Abyssal Song
A fantasy interactive story about an Oracle who recieves a vision about a future disaster
Status | In development |
Author | Ri |
Genre | Interactive Fiction |
Tags | Adult, Amare, Dating Sim, Fantasy, Meaningful Choices, Multiple Endings, Romance, Story Rich, Twine |
Languages | English |
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